Mark up comments is as below:
Please review APA sources and the Essay Example.
Introduction tips: One paragraph about 5-8 sentences. Keep this concise. Please start the paragraph by grabbing the reader’s attention in the first 2-3 sentences, then please be sure to include a sentence or 2 “This paper will discuss…” to outline the main questions to be answered. Use a few words from each question to outline what the essay will discuss.
For Conclusion –below is the feedback.
Please review APA sources and the Essay Example.
Conclusion paragraph tips: One paragraph about 5-8 sentences. Please summarize the main points of the paper. I should easily be able to see a correlation to each answer in the conclusion. Do NOT include new information or citations.
Below is the feedback for APA formatting.